Aperture

Images and Commentary from Shayna and Ted

1. Shayna 1.6.10 / 9am

   Love the angle, the DOF, the details, and the colors. I’m not sure about the square dimensions, The pole on the right seems to overtake that side of the photo. If I recall correctly, one could see more of the metal fence/gate before you cropped the image into a square; I think retaining that (without showing the ‘MASTER’ on the lock, which was definitely a distracting element) would improve this image. Alternatively, you could try adding some artificial rust to the right pole to make it less overwhelmingly grey.
2. Andrew 1.7.10 / 12pm

   I like the texture and the angle, but tonally it seems very flat, there’s not a lot of contrasting light or dark areas. Stronger lighting, like a beefier version of the soft lighting coming in from the right, would help emphasize the texture too.

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