Comments on: off guard http://aperture.shaynaingram.com/2009/12/off-guard/ Images and Commentary from Shayna and Ted Fri, 14 Oct 2011 16:51:58 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Shayna http://aperture.shaynaingram.com/2009/12/off-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-61 Shayna Fri, 11 Dec 2009 23:41:55 +0000 http://aperture.shaynaingram.com/2009/12/off-guard/#comment-61 I need to show you the original shot and see what you can do with the colors. I think my edits darkened her hair, but overall the photo was a bit grey originally. I want to see what you can come up with! :) I need to show you the original shot and see what you can do with the colors. I think my edits darkened her hair, but overall the photo was a bit grey originally. I want to see what you can come up with! :)

]]> By: Ted Cabeen http://aperture.shaynaingram.com/2009/12/off-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-57 Ted Cabeen Fri, 11 Dec 2009 06:54:23 +0000 http://aperture.shaynaingram.com/2009/12/off-guard/#comment-57 Agreed that focus is a touch off, but you captured a great expression. I've seen reference to Canon AF being fast but sometimes a bit off, which may have been the case here. I like the framing of the shot with her right side cut off. Normally that's a bit risky, but it works well here. You might try to bring out a little more color in this shot. Her face and hair feel a bit muddled. That could just be the light you had, but it might be improvable. Agreed that focus is a touch off, but you captured a great expression. I’ve seen reference to Canon AF being fast but sometimes a bit off, which may have been the case here. I like the framing of the shot with her right side cut off. Normally that’s a bit risky, but it works well here.

You might try to bring out a little more color in this shot. Her face and hair feel a bit muddled. That could just be the light you had, but it might be improvable.

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